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Chapter 1
"C'mon, guys!" Alex the lion told his friend, who was putting the finishing touches on the new raft.
"Don't rush me, Alex! Masterpieces take time, and patience!" Marty the zebra snapped.
Alex chuckled, "The Titanic was a masterpiece, Marty." then he laughed.
"Heh, heh, heh, you're a comic genius!" Marty said sarcastically. He tied the last log on the raft. "There, all done." It was pretty big, for a raft anyway.
"Is it safe? I don't see any life jackets." Melman the giraffe said worriedly as he walked up.
"Sure it's safe, Melman! I built it!" Marty said proudly.
"That's comforting!" He said sarcastically.
"Don't be such a baby, Melman! It looks safe to me!" Gloria the hippo said helpfully.
Melman snorted, "That's easy for you to say, you can swim!"
"Ok, ok, less fighting, more sailing!" Alex said. "New York, here we come!" he cried, jumping on the raft.
"Marty, Melman, and Gloria pushed the raft into the water and jumped on. They were 20 feet away from the shore when Melman yelled, "Oh wait! Sunblock!" he said, knowing he forgot somthing.
"Forget it, Melman." Alex said warily.
After a while, everyone was starting to get bored. Then Marty got an idea.
"I got it!" he yelled. Then he started to sing, "A pirate's life is a life for me!"
"Yo, ho, ho, and a bottle of rum!" Alex chimed in.
"I get seasick by the sea." Melman started.
"Yo, ho, ho, and a bottle of..." Marty and Alex were cut off as somthing rammed into the raft.
"What was that?!" Gloria said.
"I don't know?!" Alex said frantically. "Melman, stick your head underwater and see what it is!"
"Not a chance! Who knows what's under there!" He snapped at Alex. Somthing rammed the raft again.
"Just do it!" Gloria said.
"FINE, you invite what kills me to my funeral!" Melman shouted then he dunked his head under water. He looked around and he saw a huge Great White Shark! He screamed under water and pulled his head back up. "JAWS IS BACK FOR REVENGE! AHHHHHHHHH!"
Gloria slapped him in the face.
"Thanks." he said calmly. Then his eyes widened as he looked back at the water. "IT'S COMING BACK!" he yelled.
Everyone huddled together waiting for their doom.
SMACK! All of a sudden the shark went flying. Somthing had rammed into it. Then a Killer whale popped out of the water.
"And don't you come back!" he yelled at the defeated shark. "Ya'll alright?" he asked the zoosters.
They nodded, eyes wide in amazement.
"Don't mind old Carmine there, he was just hungry." The whale told them.
"That was phad, man!" Marty said.
"Thanks, by the way, name's Kip, anything else i can help ya'll with?" he asked.
Alex spoke up, "Would you be able to take us to New York?"
"Hmmmm, i don't know where New York is, but i can try." Kip said helpfully.
"That would be great, thanks!" Alex said.
The whale got behind the raft and pushed. By the time the whale got to shore, the zoosters were asleep. Using his seal catching technique, he got the raft on shore, then swam away.
The next morning, they woke up to find they were yet again, on yet another beach, neither Madagascar's or New York's.
"Perfect!" Alex said sarcastically. "Now what do we do?! Curse you Kip!"
"Alright, let's chill, let's just chilllll." Marty said calmly. "Let's just go see if there are any people on this island."
"It's not an island, mates, it's a continent!" a voice said to their left.
They turned around to see a large wolf-like creature standing there. It was multicolored and had very large ears.
"Who are you?" Melman asked nervously.
"Name's Jack, Jack the African Wild dog. I'm guessing you're newcomers to these parts, aren't you?" He asked them.
"Yeah, we are. Do you know where the people are?" Alex asked.
"Why, you got a death wish or somthing?" Jack asked.
Alex blinked, "Noooo, why?"
"Cause human's around here, kill animals like you!" he said.
"What?! That's insane! That's..." Melman didn't finish.
"Unfortunately true, mate." Jack finished. "If you're planning on surviving here, you're gonna have to stick with me for a while. Now c'mon, we have to get back to my place before nightfall, we don't want Alyssa Jaws catching us out here at night."
"Who's Alyssa Jaws?" Gloria asked.
Jack looked around, "I'll tell you after we get to my place, now c'mon! We gotta hurry." Jack said trotting away.
The others had no choice but to follow him, whoever this Alyssa Jaws was, they knew she probably wasn't friendly.
